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Hi Sloan! In the first paragraph, you mention that sometimes you have difficulty with spelling and grammar, which is understandable. In the second sentence of your second parapgrah, you typed 'to' instead of 'too.' I love that this quarter you decided to go for a book that has more depth than your previous book. From Baghdad, With Love manages to be inspiring and heartbreaking at the same time, so I think you'll love it. It's also got a happy ending, which everybody loves. Did you know there's actually a sequel to it? It's a follow-up book on Lava's life after the war. I really want to read it. I also love that you mentioned me in the last paragraph! Are you going to try to keep up to date on your blog posts this quarter or do you prefer waiting until later? I tried to keep up to date last quarter; I hate getting behind on things. I always end up feeling overwhelmed. I hope you like the book!

Hi Kristy! If you want to improve your spelling and grammar, you could try typing up your blog posts in a word document so that you can spell check it. What are some of things you did well? Your book looks really interesting. Is it set in an alternate universe or post apocalyptic? It almost sounds like it is. Earlier you told me it was a bit like The Hunger Games, which is a book series I really loved. Maybe I'll try reading Ship Breaker. Do you like it so far? Do you think you would recommend it to anyone?

Hi Courtney! My website link post was one of my strongest entries too. For the pictures post, did you include pictures that expressed the theme of your book? That was one of the recommendations on my post. I'm going to try to focus more on the theme of my book this quarter; maybe you can too. I'm so glad you're reading From Baghdad, With Love! It's really an amazing book. It has a great message and there's never a dull moment. Did you know there's a sequel? It's about Lava's life in America. I really want to read it.